Cursed? He says he's cursed.
I know my place; I know my part.
I'm tired of being still and playing dead
Maybe I'm just too rehearsed.
Cursed? That's a bit too tart,
he's the one who played my heart.
it seems everyones fault in matters of the heart...at least to the other party. nicely played caty. thanks for linking up with one shot this week. nice repitition and hooking us at the end...
When I read this I immediately thought - "The cheek of him saying he was cursed!" and I hope the person in the poem told him so and let go of their usual "rehearsed" behaviour. You say a lot here in a few words.
Sounds like misdirection. "It was me, not you." How about the truth. That's all we ask in a relationship. Right, Caty?
ReplyDeleteit seems everyones fault in matters of the heart...at least to the other party. nicely played caty. thanks for linking up with one shot this week. nice repitition and hooking us at the end...
ReplyDeleteso much truth written with so few words..brilliantly done!
ReplyDeletewell done!
ReplyDeleteWhen I read this I immediately thought - "The cheek of him saying he was cursed!" and I hope the person in the poem told him so and let go of their usual "rehearsed" behaviour. You say a lot here in a few words.
ReplyDeleteshirt and to the point..very well executed (you didnt did you!!!!)...thanks for being part of this Pete
ReplyDeletedid i say shirt i meant short!!!!
ReplyDeleteLove how you wrote this Caty.
ReplyDeleteA good friend told me
ReplyDeletethe reader doesn't always
see what the writer writes
because they read it with their heart
The devil
made them do it
along with a fifth
and a strong back hand
The devil
made them do it
or as a child their
father taught them well
The devil
made them do it
when they die I hope
they get new lesions in hell